Birthstone Witch
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Story is it a good one? ?
please don't copy this it's taken me 3 months to think of a plot
13 y/o Giana yearwood is sent off to an academy in the high hills of scotland, and has always had this weird necklace with her birthstone on it. The people at academy are like whats that? her best friend adelaide has one too. Her other friend (i cant rerememberer name) has a HOT brother that Giana falls in love with, anyway she falls down a well, gets out learns she's apart of an awesome witch clan and can defy gravity. Well she must leave the academy with 11 other witches, which adelaide is. All the witches are destined to burn in hell, so they try to break the curse by finding the one who cast it. Turns out it goes back to the 1600's their anancestorsere good witches who acaccidentallyilled a little boy with their powers and yea, Giana has to leave Dax the guy she falls in love with, but yea anyway what do you think, that was kind of roughly written.
it definitely has potential. i would depend on how well you develop the plot, and how well it's written.
i think the characters should be older - 13 year olds aren't very mature at all.
i also think that it doesn't need to be a love subplot. there could be a crush, but not a "love". because despite the popular belief of 13 year olds, 13 year olds aren't in love, they're in lust.
